The service history was not mentioned, which for a high mileage car might concern people.
No mention of the a/c working or not.
Window tints are to everyone's taste. If they are legal he should mention that.
Some photos were not in focus.
I think the starting price was too close to the car's value. If he's after £2k then a classified add would be better, or set an attractively low starting price to raise more interest in the auction.